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Break into the past...
Thanks Jaijui and R rakheee for being here....
Well I am the person who has been there..
Its been a revelation of sorts and most important we take things far too judgemental....
will keep writing...
Prison diary..
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The messenger comes calling...
Dear Friends,
Thanks a ton for your comments, actually to tell you the truth, I was writing a separate post for thanks...anyways I think I will acknowledge comments now on without fail.
Dear Rakhee,
Thanks so much for being here... Its readers like you who spur me on..and yeah it took sometime for me to recollect myself and so this delay in comments..
Prison diary.
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IS IT NIGHT MARE…DREAM…STORY…OR MSG (MY) LIFE ????
hello dhivya,
read your dream, it has a lot of breaks which ur cycle didnt have...
good attempt, you need to keep your tempo to the scene then it will be really good. try taking a second person narrative that will be easy on grammar.
thanks and keep writing....
PD
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